문장 중 어색하거나 틀린 곳이 어디인지 잘 모르겠어요.
Kong Byung-seol is my uncle. He is 40 years old. He got married, 13years ago. He has lived in Bun-dang. His job is a journalist.
There are six people in his family. His family consists of his wife, his older daughter, his younger son, his younger daughter and his mother-in-law.
He likes to catch ball with his son and daughter. Also he loves to watching movie, too. I admire my uncle who has a talent for his job. He was interested in writing and speech. Finally, he became a journalist. So I really admire my uncle.
영어 문장에서 틀린 부분을 알려주세요
미투리 2022.06.19 댓글 5
박애교2022.06.19
13 years ago는 띄어 쓰고 married 뒤 쉼표는 빼는 게 자연스러워요.
수련2022.06.19
글 전체를 현재형으로 쓰려는 건가요, 과거 이야기도 섞인 건가요?
다가2022.06.19
저도 문장마다 시제가 달라져서 자주 헷갈려요.
채꽃2022.06.19
He has lived in Bundang은 지금까지 살아온 뜻이면 괜찮고, 직업은 He is a journalist가 자연스러워요.
He likes catching a ball이라고 하고 loves watching movies처럼 동명사를 쓰면 됩니다.
마지막 문장은 admire가 반복되니 한 번은 다른 표현으로 바꿔도 좋아요.
도전중2022.06.20
가족이 여섯 명이라고 했는데 열거한 사람은 본인도 포함한 건가요?
구성원 수를 한 번 확인하면 좋겠어요.