영어 문장 문법 확인 부탁드립니다

아래 문장에 문법 오류가 있는지 확인 부탁드립니다.
“I got the black video from 16:00 to 16:09 GMT.
As I talked with your staff on the phone, I'd like to get a detailed report regarding this problem (Fiber Link Problem), and be sure to refeed the missing video at the end of this Gymnastics Program (around 17:30 GMT).
Best regards,
Tom”