시험에 나올 문장 변형 질문드려요

“The most amazing results, however, were the improved test score and attendance, the increased confidence of these students, as well as significant reductions in violence.”
이 문장을 not only A, but also B 구문으로 바꾸면 이렇게 쓰면 될까요?
“The most amazing results, however, were not only significant reductions in violence, but also the improved test score and attendance, the increased confidence of these students.”
아니면 항목을 나눠서 써야 할지, 순서는 어떻게 해야 하는지 궁금합니다.