아래 문장들에서 문법적으로 어색하거나 틀린 부분이 있는지 궁금해요.
어떻게 고치면 자연스러울지도 알려주세요.
1. I devote all my efforts to one goal that I have set not setting several goals.
2. My ultimate goals in life are to live happily enjoying every minute of my life. I live bearing the sentence Be the person that is always necessary everywhere in my mind.
3. I like to be the person like light or salt that is just necessary for the world.